Bloody Chaos Story Part 5


All in this fic doesn’t belong to me! Bloody Chaos does and Scarlet Fever/Chaos belongs to askmyocponiestrololo!

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The next day, Celestia was in Ponyville waiting on her most trusted student, Twilight. They were going to go into the Everfree Forest and look for Bloody Chaos. Celestia had told her student that she and Chaos were childhood friends. Celestia sighed and looked up at the clouds.

“Okay,” said Twilight, “I’m ready now.”

Celestia looked at her student and smiled. She stood up and walked with Twilight.

“You think you can get him to talk?” Twilight asked half way to their destination.

Celestia frowned.

“I hope I can,” she said, “It’s been so long that he might not recognize me.”

Twilight gave her a reassuring smile.

“I’m sure he will,” she said, “after all you never forget your friends.”

Celestia’s frown turned into a small smile.

“That’s right,” she said looking in front of her.

The top of the trees of the Everfree Forest came into view.

“It’ll be best not to split up,” the sun princess said, “but do keep your eyes open.”

Twilight nodded.

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Bloody Chaos was walking around the forest for a bit. He was exploring a part he hadn’t been to in a long time. His head moved from side to side as she sight spell filled his mind with images of his surrounding.

“Now where was that lake again?” he asked him self.

Nothing but trees and bushes. Oh and a huge fallen limb. Chaos used his magic to lift it and pass under it. He ended his spell, causing the limb to fall with a loud bang. Birds from near by trees flew off, scared by the noise.

“Ah there it is,” Chaos said finding a lake.

He came to it and started to drink. He stopped and ears fall flat against his head when something growled behind him. It was a Timberwolf. Chaos’ horn glowed. The creature’s shadow stretched behind it. A hand with a red swirly line pattern popped up. The Timberwolf, sensing danger, looked behind it. It’s mouth fall open when it saw the hand.

“You’re annoying,” started Chaos, “so go away.”

The hand flicked the beast, sending it flying. Chaos snorted an annoying snort and went back to drinking.

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Celestia and Twilight jumped when something crashed behind them. They looked.

“A Timberwolf?” Celestia asked.

Twilight looked up at the sky.

“But how could a creature, with no wings, fly?” she asked.

Celestia looked toward the direction it came from.

“Only one way to find out,” she said.

Her and Twilight galloped to their left. Green eyes watch them. White hooves followed them. They stopped when they came to a lake. There, by the water’s edge, was a red stallion. Celestia stared at him in disbelief when she recognized the black bat cutie mark. She walked forward and stepped on a stick. The snap caused Chaos’ head to go up. He was on alert.

“Who’s there?” he asked.

“It’s me Chaos,” Celestia said still coming closer to him.

“Who are you?” he asked not recognizing the voice.

“Chaos,” Celestia started, “It’s me, Celestia.”

Chaos had a confused look on his face. His horn glow, making Celestia glow. Chaos gasped and backed into a tree.

“Cel…Cel…” he was too in shock to form a complete sentence.

Celestia gave him a genital and sweet smile.

“It’s okay Chaos,” she said gently, “I’m not going to hurt you.”

She looked closely at Chaos’ blindfold. She used her magic to try and get it off.

I want to see what you did to your beautiful eyes Chaos, she thought.

Chaos started to panic.

No no no! He thought, Don’t take it off! Don’t look!

The blindfold came off. Celestia gasped which made Twilight look. Chaos had nothing, but sockets. The worse part was you can see his insides through them. Twilight felt her stomach turn. Chaos took that moment to run.

“No!” Celestia yelled, “Chaos wait!”

Celestia look at the ground in defeat.

“All I wanted was to get him back,” she said.

“Then allow me to help you,” said somepony from behind, “my princess.”

Celestia and Twilight looked. There stood a white unicorn with red and yellow hair and a book with a red cross over it type a cutie mark.

“I’m Scarlet Fever,” Scarlet answered, “I’m Bloody Chaos’ little sister.”

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Oh yeah, epic cliff hanger B)

Bloody Chaos Story Part 3

bc story scene


Warning: Mary Sue a head! If you don’t like it then please click the red X on the tab! Others enjoy!


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Bloody Chaos walked through the forest he had ran to nearly 1,000 years ago. He was using his horn as a way to see where he was heading. The spell he was using created small magic balls that disappeared when he touches them. He halted when he herd the sound of hooves. A humming of a melody came to Chaos’ ears.


What song is that? He asked him self, it’s not one of the songs sang here at Equestria.


The humming got closer to him, but he did not move. If it was a beast of the Everfree Forest he could take it on, no problem. The humming stopped.


“My my,” said somepony, “that’s a great wound you have there on your face. What creature has done that?”


The accent throw him off a little. Bloody Chaos just stood there for a moment with an expressionless face.


“I do not wish to share such information to a stranger,” he finally answered.


“Forgive me for being rude,” said the other pony, “I be named Zecora.”


Bloody Chaos’ horn glow, causing Zecora to glow as well. She gasped in fear. The glow ended.


“What is a Zebra doing all the way out here?” Bloody Chaos asked.


“That is unfair,” started Zecora, “You didn’t answer my question and gave your name and yet here you are asking yours.”


Bloody Chaos’ ears fall flat against his head. HE found this Zebra a bit annoying.


“I am called Bloody Chaos,” he answered calmly, “as for my eyes, it wasn’t a creature, but my self who had done it. As for why I will not say.”


“Very well,” said Zecora, “Now for yours I will only say that I came here because Equestria seemed to be a lovely place to live in.”


Bloody Chaos snorted. Zecora ignored it.


“If you don’t mind,” she started again, “please follow me. I wish to make sure your wound is not infected or at least try to clean the dried blood off.”


Zecora glowed again. She looked behind her see small balls of magic leading up to Bloody Chaos’ horn.


Must be using magic to follow, she thought before heading to her hut.


She held the door open for Bloody Chaos to come in. Afterwords she closed the door and turned to look at him. That’s when she noticed that Bloody Chaos has the same height as Princess Celestia.


“It looks like you have to sit down on the floor,” she said, “you are a bit too tall for me to reach.”


Bloody Chaos used he’s magic to see where objects were at before setting down. Zecora reached up to his face, but only made it to his neck.


“You might have to lay down,” she said, “I still can’t reach.”


Bloody Chaos did just that. Zecora moved he’s head around to look into the sockets. Surprisingly there was nothing wrong with them. She got a wet rag and started to wash off the dried blood.


“How old are you, Bloody Chaos?” she asked.


“A little over 1,000,” Bloody Chaos answered.


Same age as her as well, Zecora thought.


She glanced down at Bloody Chaos’ but shaped cutie mark.


“You have an interesting cutie mark,” Zecora commented.


“I use to love scaring other ponies when I was little,” Bloody Chaos said, “now I only do it to the creatures in this forest.”


Zecora put the rag on the table once she was done. She got a blindfold that was brown and had clips on both ends. She started to put it over Bloody Chaos’ sockets. Bloody Chaos raised his head high preventing Zecora to finish.


“I’m putting a blindfold on so nothing can get in the sockets,” she explained.


Bloody Chaos lowered his head. Zecora finished putting it on him.


“There,” she said, “It was nice meeting you Bloody Chaos.”


Bloody Chaos simply nodded and headed out the door.


“Zecora!” somepony shouted.


Bloody Chaos stood on alert upon hearing the new voice. Applebloom came running to them. She stopped when she noticed a strange tall red pony. She came to Bloody Chaos.


“Hello,” Applebloom said, “who are you?”


Bloody Chaos stayed looking high up a head.


“Bloody Chaos,” he said realizing the voice sounded like it belong to a filly, “who might you be child?”


“I’m Applebloom,” she answered.


Bloody Chaos’ horn glowed making Applebloom glow. She started to laugh.


“Hey that tickles,” she said.


Bloody Chaos stopped and lowered his head to her level now knowing her height. He gave a small smile.


“It tickles huh?” he asked.


“Yes,” Applebloom answered.


Bloody Chaos made his horn and her glow again. Applebloom fall to the ground laughing. Zecora chuckled seeing the two.


Looks like he likes children, she thought.


Bloody Chaos stopped and raised his head. He looked forward.


“I best be off,” he said, “It was nice meeting you Applebloom. Thanks Zecora.”


Zecora nodded forgetting that he was blind.


“Aww,” said Applebloom.


“Don’t worry little one,” Bloody Chaos said, “we’ll cross paths again.”


With that Bloody Chaos made his magic trail and left.


“Such a strange and mysterious pony,” Zecora commented before motioning for Applebloom to come inside her hut.

Bloody Chaos Story Part 2

bc part 2

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It has been nearly a year since Chaos and Celestia became friends. Celestia found out Chaos’ special talent was scaring people and enjoys it ’till they scream because of his eyes. Chaos learned somethings about Celestia in return. She could control the sun. she is also a big sister now.


Celestia started to make her way to the garden.


“Going to see the friend again?” asked her mom.


“Yes,” answered Celestia, “He’s going to show me some new spells.”


“I would like to meet him sometime,” her mom said.


“You wouldn’t like him,” said Celestia real quickly, “he’s too…common for your taste.”


Plus you’ll freak when you see his eyes, she thought.


“Still,” started her mom, “he must be a smart pony to be teaching you new spells you don’t all ready know.”


“Besides that I would like to know how he can sneak past the guards,” said Celestia’s dad coming up behind her mom.


“I don’t know,” said Celestia, “I didn’t even know we had guards posted in the garden.”


her dad try to say something else, but was cut off by her mom.


“Go play with your friend,” she said.


Celestia smiled and ran out to the garden. Her mom turned to her dad.


“If you wish to learn how that colt sneaks past the guards follow her,” said her mom, “I’m staying out that though. I don’t wish for our oldest to be mad at me.”


Celestia’s dad snorted as soon as his wife walked away and started to follow Celestia’s trail.


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Celestia made it to their meeting place. She looked around.


“Chaos?” she asked.


A snap from behind made her look in that direction. She turned back only to be a few inches away from Chaos’ face.


“Boo!” he shouted.


Celestia gasped in fear and fall on her back. Chaos laughed while levitating him self from the branch to the ground.


“Oh,” Celestia said while getting up.


She playfully hit him on the arm and laughed.


“What took you so long?” Chaos asked.


“Mom and dad were asking about you,” Celestia answered, “Dad was wondering how you get past the guards.”


“Oh that’s simple,” Said Chaos, “watch.”


Chaos’ horn glowed a red color and his body split into three snakes. They slivered around Celestia and turned back into Chaos.


“Wow,” she said.


“Now are you ready for your lesson?” Chaos asked.


Celestia nodded.


“All right,” said Chaos, “Today I’ll show you how to do magic based on fear.”


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Celestia’s dad had been looking everywhere for her. He looked to a tree on the hill and caught a glimpse of her pink tail. He started to walk to her.


“Celestia,” he called out.


“Dad?” she called back.


Her dad stopped in his tracks when he saw Chaos. Her dad’s face changed from happy to angry when he looked closely at Chaos’ eyes. He charged at him.


“Dad wait!” Celestia yelled.


“Get away from my daughter, demon!” her dad yelled.


He stomped in front of Chaos causing him to back up. Chaos looked fearfully at Celestia.


“Dad stop!” She yelled.


Chaos ran and Celestia’s dad chased after him for a little bit. He snorted at the retreating back of Chaos.


“Good riddance,” he said.


Celestia started to cry.


“You never let me have any friends!” She shouted, “I hate you!”


She ran back to the castle.


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Chaos ran many days and nights. He stopped in a creepy forest by a lake. He looked at himself angrily.


“These stupid eyes!” he yelled at him self, “They always cause me to be alone! Always! I know what I should do. I should get rid of them. Yes and everypony will look upon me without fear.”


He levitate two fire wood size sticks. He used his magic to sharpen them into spears. He stabbed his eyes out with them. He screamed in pain as blood stained the grass red.


From this day and forward no pony will see me as a demon anymore, he thought, I’ll be a normal pony now. A normal pony.


He pulled out the spears and laid them on the ground. He’s mind filled with thoughts of a peaceful and normal life that lies a head.

Bloody Chaos Story Part 1

mlp first meeting

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A door opens and a little filly with a crown on top of her head came running out.

“Be careful Celestia!” The filly’s mother shouted.

“I will mother!” Celestia shouted back.

She run to the garden.

“Now what shall I play?” she asked her self, “I know!”

She crouch down.

“The brave princess of the cats crouches as she spots her pray,” Celestia said.

Bushes shook near by. Celestia looked at it. The bushes instantly stopped.

I must be my imagination, she thought as she crouches back down.

The bushes started up again. Celestia looked at it again, but this time it didn’t stop. She started to back away from it.

“Okay maybe it wasn’t my imagination,” she said.

A male red filly jumped out and roared. Celestia gasped and fall back wards. The red filly laughed. Celestia’s brows meet and she got up. She marched up to him. The red filly gave a panic look and started to back up with ever step Celestia took.

“Why you little,” she said, “do you have any idea who I am? Well do you? I’m the princess of Equestria.”

“To be quite frank with you,” said the red filly standing his ground, “I don’t really care who you are. Your just like everypony else. No one is higher or lower then the rest. It’s just the way some acted that makes it seem like it.”

Celestia looked surprised at him.

“You’re very wise for your age,” she commented, “What’s your name?”

“Bloody Chaos,” he answered while bowing to her, “nice to make your acquaintance Princess Celestia.”

She gasped. Bloody Chaos looked at her.

“Your eyes,” she said.

and there goes that friendship, he thought.

“I know,” Bloody Chaos said, “they’re scary.”

“No,” said Celestia, “They’re beautiful!”

Bloody Chaos jaw dropped.

Beautiful!? he thought.

all his life people ran off we they see him because of his eyes. His eyes were slitted and golden. The sclera was not white but black, giving him a demon like look. It was because of this that his parents abandon him as a baby. Bloody Chaos started to cry.

“Hey,” said Celestia with concern, “what’s wrong?”

“No one has ever said that to me,” he answered.

“Why?” she asked.

“Everypony gets scared when they see them,” Bloody Chaos answered.

“Well I’m not scared,” Celestia said, “but right now you are in trouble.”

Bloody Chaos looked at her with a puzzle look.

“You aren’t suppose to be on the castle ground without invitation,” she said, “but I know of way that I’ll keep my mouth shut.”

“That would be?” he asked.

“Play with me Bloody Chaos!” She answered happily.

“Okay,” Bloody Chaos answered, “and call me Chaos.”

Celestia smiled and tagged him and started to run off with Chaos chasing her.

Bloody Chaos Story Part 4

Bloody Chaos belongs to me, all others belong to Fyre-Flye.

Note: please make sure to read the end note after the story!

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Apple Bloom was racing to her sister, Applejack. She wanted to tell her about the pony she just met a few hours ago.

“Applejack!” Apple Bloom called, “Applejack!”

“I’m over here!” Applejack shouted.

Apple Bloom ran to her out of breath. Applejack was with the rest of the main six. They all were looking at her.

“I just met somepony that lives in the Everfree Forest,” Apple Bloom said as soon as she got her breath back.

“That lives in the Everfree Forest?” Applejack asked, “what is a pony doing there?”

“He’s blind, tall as Princess Celestia, and really fun to play with,” Apple Bloom went on ignoring her sister’s questions.

Twilight blinked a few times.

“As tall a Celestia?” she asked, “is he an Alicorn?”

Apple Bloom shook her head.

“No,” She answered, “he’s a unicorn like you, Twilight.”

Rarity looked at Twilight.

“Can unicorns live that long?” she asked her.

Twilight shrugged.

“I have to do some research about it,” she said.

Rainbow Dash landed and seemed to be in thought.

“You said he was blind right?” she asked.

Apple Bloom nodded.

“He had a blindfold on,” she answered, “and Zecora told me that he couldn’t because something important was gone. What ever that means.”

Pinkie Pie laughed.

“Silly I know what that means!” she said.

“You do?” everypony else asked.

“Yeah,” Pinkie Pie answered, “It means he’s sight is missing, gone off some where for somepony to find it.”

Everypony else sweat dropped.

“Maybe Celestia know about him,” Twilight thought out loud.

“It wouldn’t hurt to ask,” Applejack said.

“I’m going to go and get Sweety Bell and Skootaloo,” said Apple Bloom, forgetting to give Twilight the pony’s name, “let me know what the princess says!”

The little filly raced off.

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When Twilight got home, she started looking for paper and a quail.

“Hey Twilight,” greeted Spike, “how was the picnic?”

“It was good,” she answered while holding up a piece of paper, “Spike where is my quail?”

“Over here,” Spike waved her over at the table.

Twilight picked it up with her magic and started writing.

“Did something happen Twilight?” asked Spike a bit worried.

“Apple Bloom came by and told us she met a pony that lives in the Everfree Forest,” Twilight answered, “I’m writing to Celestia to see if she knows him.”

She rolled up the letter and gave it to Spike for him to send.

“Now to see how long a unicorn can live up to,” Twilight said.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders were racing to Zecora’s hut.

“What if this pony you met isn’t there?” Sweety Bell asked.

“Then we’ll come back every day to see if he is.” Scootaloo answered.

“We’re almost there,” Apple Bloom said seeing the top of Zecora’s hut come into view.

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Bloody Chaos had came back when he sensed one of the forest creatures heading in Zecora’s direction. He warned her about it. Zecora thanked him and offered him some tea. Chaos didn’t want to seem too rude and he was a bit thirsty, so he accepted. He was laying down beside the hut sipping the tea.

“Zecora!” Apple Bloom’s voice called out.

Chaos’ ears turned in the direction of the voice.

“She’s back,” Chaos said simply.

Zecora smiled and looked.

“And she brought a few friends too,” she informed, “no doubt to meet you.”

Chaos got into a position like he was asleep.

“Shh,” he said to Zecora.

She smiled, knowing what he was planning. Zecora waved at the crusaders.

“Hello little ones,” she greeted.

“Hey Zecora,” Apple Bloom said, “is Chaos here? I have a few friends for him to meet.”

Zecora glanced behind her. The crusaders looked.

“Aw is he asleep?” Scootaloo asked.

Chaos let out a small snore.

“Let’s not bother him,” suggested Sweety Bell.

Apple Bloom walked over to him and poked his nose.

“Leave him be child,” Zecora said acting out her part in his plan.

“But I want him to meet Scootaloo and Sweety Bell,” Apple Bloom protested, “Chaos. Chaos. Wakey, wakey.”

Chaos stretched and grabbed Apple Bloom, causing her to yelp. He rolled onto his back. Zecora grinned as she noticed two trails of magic sparks on the ground, heading to the other two. They were too busy watching Apple Bloom try to get out of Chaos’ hold to noticed the trails. They started to glow red and laugh. Zecora smiled and laughed at the scene.

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Twilight, with Spike on her back, was racing to Zecora’s. Celestia had replied back that she needed more of a description of the blind pony.

“I hope he’s friendly,” Spike said.

Twilight’s ear shot up as she herd laughter. She stopped when she saw the crusaders flying in the air. Zecora was smiling and laughing at them.

“Whoo,” said Spike when he looked at Chaos.

Twilight looked over at him too. She was in aw. He was as tall as her teacher. He, also, had a long black mane and was a red color. His cutie mark was a black bat and he also had leg armor on.

He’s very interesting and mysterious, Twilight thought.

Spike then started to fly with them.

“Hey this is fun!” he shouted.

After a few more minuets, Chaos sat them on his back. His horn still glow though. The magic sparks lead to Twilight, making her glow.

A sight spell, she thought.

Chaos turned to her and bowed. Twilight bowed too.

“Hello,” he said, “I’m Bloody Chaos.”

“Oh um, Twilight Sparkle,” she introduced herself, “U never seen a unicorn so tall before.”

“Yeah you’re as big as Princess Celestia,” said Spike who was insistently shushed by the crusaders.

Chaos’ ears twitched and the smile disappeared, replaced by a frown.

That’s interesting, Twilight thought.

Chaos floated the fillies and Spike to the ground.

“That’s because I’m the same age as her,” he said, “and please don’t say her name around me.”

That got Twilight’s interest.

“Why?” she asked.

Chaos’ ears fall flat against his head and started to walk away, using his sight spell to guide him.

“I rather not talk about it,” he said before disappearing.

Twilight frowned. Something was eating away at him and she wanted to know.

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Another letter from Twilight appeared in front of Celestia that night. She was currently in her chambers. She open it. She beamed when she read that the mysterious blind pony was Chaos. She smiled at all of the wonderful memories she had with him. The smile turned into a frown when she remembered the first letter mention him being blind.

I sure hope he didn’t do what I think he did, she thought.

When she read the last part, she gasped.

“Why would he regret knowing me?” she asked to no pony.

Her expression now, was one of hurt.

I need to see him again, she thought, I really want know why he regrets such a thing.

With a sigh Celestia laid her head down. She let her dreams take her away from her thoughts of Chaos for the night.

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I tried looking up the age of death for a unicorn, but only found that they live forever :/