Bloody Chaos Story Part 2

bc part 2

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It has been nearly a year since Chaos and Celestia became friends. Celestia found out Chaos’ special talent was scaring people and enjoys it ’till they scream because of his eyes. Chaos learned somethings about Celestia in return. She could control the sun. she is also a big sister now.


Celestia started to make her way to the garden.


“Going to see the friend again?” asked her mom.


“Yes,” answered Celestia, “He’s going to show me some new spells.”


“I would like to meet him sometime,” her mom said.


“You wouldn’t like him,” said Celestia real quickly, “he’s too…common for your taste.”


Plus you’ll freak when you see his eyes, she thought.


“Still,” started her mom, “he must be a smart pony to be teaching you new spells you don’t all ready know.”


“Besides that I would like to know how he can sneak past the guards,” said Celestia’s dad coming up behind her mom.


“I don’t know,” said Celestia, “I didn’t even know we had guards posted in the garden.”


her dad try to say something else, but was cut off by her mom.


“Go play with your friend,” she said.


Celestia smiled and ran out to the garden. Her mom turned to her dad.


“If you wish to learn how that colt sneaks past the guards follow her,” said her mom, “I’m staying out that though. I don’t wish for our oldest to be mad at me.”


Celestia’s dad snorted as soon as his wife walked away and started to follow Celestia’s trail.


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Celestia made it to their meeting place. She looked around.


“Chaos?” she asked.


A snap from behind made her look in that direction. She turned back only to be a few inches away from Chaos’ face.


“Boo!” he shouted.


Celestia gasped in fear and fall on her back. Chaos laughed while levitating him self from the branch to the ground.


“Oh,” Celestia said while getting up.


She playfully hit him on the arm and laughed.


“What took you so long?” Chaos asked.


“Mom and dad were asking about you,” Celestia answered, “Dad was wondering how you get past the guards.”


“Oh that’s simple,” Said Chaos, “watch.”


Chaos’ horn glowed a red color and his body split into three snakes. They slivered around Celestia and turned back into Chaos.


“Wow,” she said.


“Now are you ready for your lesson?” Chaos asked.


Celestia nodded.


“All right,” said Chaos, “Today I’ll show you how to do magic based on fear.”


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Celestia’s dad had been looking everywhere for her. He looked to a tree on the hill and caught a glimpse of her pink tail. He started to walk to her.


“Celestia,” he called out.


“Dad?” she called back.


Her dad stopped in his tracks when he saw Chaos. Her dad’s face changed from happy to angry when he looked closely at Chaos’ eyes. He charged at him.


“Dad wait!” Celestia yelled.


“Get away from my daughter, demon!” her dad yelled.


He stomped in front of Chaos causing him to back up. Chaos looked fearfully at Celestia.


“Dad stop!” She yelled.


Chaos ran and Celestia’s dad chased after him for a little bit. He snorted at the retreating back of Chaos.


“Good riddance,” he said.


Celestia started to cry.


“You never let me have any friends!” She shouted, “I hate you!”


She ran back to the castle.


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Chaos ran many days and nights. He stopped in a creepy forest by a lake. He looked at himself angrily.


“These stupid eyes!” he yelled at him self, “They always cause me to be alone! Always! I know what I should do. I should get rid of them. Yes and everypony will look upon me without fear.”


He levitate two fire wood size sticks. He used his magic to sharpen them into spears. He stabbed his eyes out with them. He screamed in pain as blood stained the grass red.


From this day and forward no pony will see me as a demon anymore, he thought, I’ll be a normal pony now. A normal pony.


He pulled out the spears and laid them on the ground. He’s mind filled with thoughts of a peaceful and normal life that lies a head.

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