Bloody Chaos Story Part 1

mlp first meeting

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A door opens and a little filly with a crown on top of her head came running out.

“Be careful Celestia!” The filly’s mother shouted.

“I will mother!” Celestia shouted back.

She run to the garden.

“Now what shall I play?” she asked her self, “I know!”

She crouch down.

“The brave princess of the cats crouches as she spots her pray,” Celestia said.

Bushes shook near by. Celestia looked at it. The bushes instantly stopped.

I must be my imagination, she thought as she crouches back down.

The bushes started up again. Celestia looked at it again, but this time it didn’t stop. She started to back away from it.

“Okay maybe it wasn’t my imagination,” she said.

A male red filly jumped out and roared. Celestia gasped and fall back wards. The red filly laughed. Celestia’s brows meet and she got up. She marched up to him. The red filly gave a panic look and started to back up with ever step Celestia took.

“Why you little,” she said, “do you have any idea who I am? Well do you? I’m the princess of Equestria.”

“To be quite frank with you,” said the red filly standing his ground, “I don’t really care who you are. Your just like everypony else. No one is higher or lower then the rest. It’s just the way some acted that makes it seem like it.”

Celestia looked surprised at him.

“You’re very wise for your age,” she commented, “What’s your name?”

“Bloody Chaos,” he answered while bowing to her, “nice to make your acquaintance Princess Celestia.”

She gasped. Bloody Chaos looked at her.

“Your eyes,” she said.

and there goes that friendship, he thought.

“I know,” Bloody Chaos said, “they’re scary.”

“No,” said Celestia, “They’re beautiful!”

Bloody Chaos jaw dropped.

Beautiful!? he thought.

all his life people ran off we they see him because of his eyes. His eyes were slitted and golden. The sclera was not white but black, giving him a demon like look. It was because of this that his parents abandon him as a baby. Bloody Chaos started to cry.

“Hey,” said Celestia with concern, “what’s wrong?”

“No one has ever said that to me,” he answered.

“Why?” she asked.

“Everypony gets scared when they see them,” Bloody Chaos answered.

“Well I’m not scared,” Celestia said, “but right now you are in trouble.”

Bloody Chaos looked at her with a puzzle look.

“You aren’t suppose to be on the castle ground without invitation,” she said, “but I know of way that I’ll keep my mouth shut.”

“That would be?” he asked.

“Play with me Bloody Chaos!” She answered happily.

“Okay,” Bloody Chaos answered, “and call me Chaos.”

Celestia smiled and tagged him and started to run off with Chaos chasing her.

Bloody Chaos Story Part 4

Bloody Chaos belongs to me, all others belong to Fyre-Flye.

Note: please make sure to read the end note after the story!

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Apple Bloom was racing to her sister, Applejack. She wanted to tell her about the pony she just met a few hours ago.

“Applejack!” Apple Bloom called, “Applejack!”

“I’m over here!” Applejack shouted.

Apple Bloom ran to her out of breath. Applejack was with the rest of the main six. They all were looking at her.

“I just met somepony that lives in the Everfree Forest,” Apple Bloom said as soon as she got her breath back.

“That lives in the Everfree Forest?” Applejack asked, “what is a pony doing there?”

“He’s blind, tall as Princess Celestia, and really fun to play with,” Apple Bloom went on ignoring her sister’s questions.

Twilight blinked a few times.

“As tall a Celestia?” she asked, “is he an Alicorn?”

Apple Bloom shook her head.

“No,” She answered, “he’s a unicorn like you, Twilight.”

Rarity looked at Twilight.

“Can unicorns live that long?” she asked her.

Twilight shrugged.

“I have to do some research about it,” she said.

Rainbow Dash landed and seemed to be in thought.

“You said he was blind right?” she asked.

Apple Bloom nodded.

“He had a blindfold on,” she answered, “and Zecora told me that he couldn’t because something important was gone. What ever that means.”

Pinkie Pie laughed.

“Silly I know what that means!” she said.

“You do?” everypony else asked.

“Yeah,” Pinkie Pie answered, “It means he’s sight is missing, gone off some where for somepony to find it.”

Everypony else sweat dropped.

“Maybe Celestia know about him,” Twilight thought out loud.

“It wouldn’t hurt to ask,” Applejack said.

“I’m going to go and get Sweety Bell and Skootaloo,” said Apple Bloom, forgetting to give Twilight the pony’s name, “let me know what the princess says!”

The little filly raced off.

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When Twilight got home, she started looking for paper and a quail.

“Hey Twilight,” greeted Spike, “how was the picnic?”

“It was good,” she answered while holding up a piece of paper, “Spike where is my quail?”

“Over here,” Spike waved her over at the table.

Twilight picked it up with her magic and started writing.

“Did something happen Twilight?” asked Spike a bit worried.

“Apple Bloom came by and told us she met a pony that lives in the Everfree Forest,” Twilight answered, “I’m writing to Celestia to see if she knows him.”

She rolled up the letter and gave it to Spike for him to send.

“Now to see how long a unicorn can live up to,” Twilight said.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders were racing to Zecora’s hut.

“What if this pony you met isn’t there?” Sweety Bell asked.

“Then we’ll come back every day to see if he is.” Scootaloo answered.

“We’re almost there,” Apple Bloom said seeing the top of Zecora’s hut come into view.

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Bloody Chaos had came back when he sensed one of the forest creatures heading in Zecora’s direction. He warned her about it. Zecora thanked him and offered him some tea. Chaos didn’t want to seem too rude and he was a bit thirsty, so he accepted. He was laying down beside the hut sipping the tea.

“Zecora!” Apple Bloom’s voice called out.

Chaos’ ears turned in the direction of the voice.

“She’s back,” Chaos said simply.

Zecora smiled and looked.

“And she brought a few friends too,” she informed, “no doubt to meet you.”

Chaos got into a position like he was asleep.

“Shh,” he said to Zecora.

She smiled, knowing what he was planning. Zecora waved at the crusaders.

“Hello little ones,” she greeted.

“Hey Zecora,” Apple Bloom said, “is Chaos here? I have a few friends for him to meet.”

Zecora glanced behind her. The crusaders looked.

“Aw is he asleep?” Scootaloo asked.

Chaos let out a small snore.

“Let’s not bother him,” suggested Sweety Bell.

Apple Bloom walked over to him and poked his nose.

“Leave him be child,” Zecora said acting out her part in his plan.

“But I want him to meet Scootaloo and Sweety Bell,” Apple Bloom protested, “Chaos. Chaos. Wakey, wakey.”

Chaos stretched and grabbed Apple Bloom, causing her to yelp. He rolled onto his back. Zecora grinned as she noticed two trails of magic sparks on the ground, heading to the other two. They were too busy watching Apple Bloom try to get out of Chaos’ hold to noticed the trails. They started to glow red and laugh. Zecora smiled and laughed at the scene.

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Twilight, with Spike on her back, was racing to Zecora’s. Celestia had replied back that she needed more of a description of the blind pony.

“I hope he’s friendly,” Spike said.

Twilight’s ear shot up as she herd laughter. She stopped when she saw the crusaders flying in the air. Zecora was smiling and laughing at them.

“Whoo,” said Spike when he looked at Chaos.

Twilight looked over at him too. She was in aw. He was as tall as her teacher. He, also, had a long black mane and was a red color. His cutie mark was a black bat and he also had leg armor on.

He’s very interesting and mysterious, Twilight thought.

Spike then started to fly with them.

“Hey this is fun!” he shouted.

After a few more minuets, Chaos sat them on his back. His horn still glow though. The magic sparks lead to Twilight, making her glow.

A sight spell, she thought.

Chaos turned to her and bowed. Twilight bowed too.

“Hello,” he said, “I’m Bloody Chaos.”

“Oh um, Twilight Sparkle,” she introduced herself, “U never seen a unicorn so tall before.”

“Yeah you’re as big as Princess Celestia,” said Spike who was insistently shushed by the crusaders.

Chaos’ ears twitched and the smile disappeared, replaced by a frown.

That’s interesting, Twilight thought.

Chaos floated the fillies and Spike to the ground.

“That’s because I’m the same age as her,” he said, “and please don’t say her name around me.”

That got Twilight’s interest.

“Why?” she asked.

Chaos’ ears fall flat against his head and started to walk away, using his sight spell to guide him.

“I rather not talk about it,” he said before disappearing.

Twilight frowned. Something was eating away at him and she wanted to know.

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Another letter from Twilight appeared in front of Celestia that night. She was currently in her chambers. She open it. She beamed when she read that the mysterious blind pony was Chaos. She smiled at all of the wonderful memories she had with him. The smile turned into a frown when she remembered the first letter mention him being blind.

I sure hope he didn’t do what I think he did, she thought.

When she read the last part, she gasped.

“Why would he regret knowing me?” she asked to no pony.

Her expression now, was one of hurt.

I need to see him again, she thought, I really want know why he regrets such a thing.

With a sigh Celestia laid her head down. She let her dreams take her away from her thoughts of Chaos for the night.

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I tried looking up the age of death for a unicorn, but only found that they live forever :/